Susie Q is a doll that lives in a school at Amy’s grandpa’s farm. When Amy first heard the story about Susie Q, she was about nine or ten years old. Susie Q is a very old doll that was Amy’s great-great with a couple more greats, grandma’s doll. She is a wooden, with black hair, faded red lips, and is pale as a pasty white. She is so old, that she looks scary, before you even know the truth about Susie Q.
The story started a long time ago before Amy’s grandpa was born. After Amy’s great-great with a few more greats, grandma died, the doll was put in an attic never to be touched or played with again. One night around mid-night in the house where the doll lived, everyone who was living in the house could hear footsteps, the lights were turning on and off upstairs. Everyone in the house woke up and was very scared and confused with what was going on. They soon found out that Susie Q was haunting the upstairs of the house. And the only way to get rid of Susie Q is to wrap her up in cloth, put her in a box and leave her there. But if she is living in your house you better beware because she will haunt you too. Susie Q has lived at Amy’s Grandpa’s farm since he first got the farm, so nobody else gets haunted by Susie Q.
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A few of Amy's sentences were a little jumbled and confusing. Amy is good with descriptions.
ReplyDeleteYou have good description and that freaking doll is creeping me out. Some things were a little hard to understand but mostly it was good.
ReplyDeletesome things were confusing and made me reread it twice to figure it out better. Other than that, it sounds pretty trippy. Me likey.
ReplyDeleteI am bad at 3rd person and pretty good with detail.
ReplyDeletePretty good descprition, but could have been a better ending.
ReplyDeleteThe doll is creepy and its so scary. You had really good detail. Good job Amy!
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