The House on That Road
A couple minutes upon arrival something crashed and fell out of the top floor window! It was a dresser. The house was a two story house with a basement. The house was an older house, built in the 30s.
When Robert and his family got to the house there was a barn and a couple of older sheds. The sheds were loaded with old stuff in them and it look like it was well used. Robert looked around the yard for a bit with his family. After that they went and looked in the house.
The house was really creepy because every thing was still in the house. The dishes were still stacked in the cupboards. When Robert walked in to the living room, everything was pushed up against the door to the outside, like they were trying to keep something out.
When Robert went looking around it got more creepy, it felt like something or someone was always watching him. Robert went upstairs and looked around. Upstairs had all the beds and dressers all still siting there.The weirdest thing that happened to Robert was he wanted to go to the attic a lot. Robert went and asked the sales person “The attic”
“ya , what about it”. “Is there anything in it” “No, why” “Just wondering, thanks” “no problem”.
After that Robert was still wondering why he wanted to go look up there. Know that Robert was done looking upstairs he went and looked down in the basement. The basement was dark because it had no lights that he could see. When he looked around the basement was all dirt except for one little cement pad about two metres by a metre. that was awkward. Why would you just put a pad of cement and not, do the whole basement.
Robert looked around some more then he left. He thanked the sales person and that he would get back to him. On the way home Robert told his family that he was not going to buy the house because he felt like there was some evil in it.
To this day Robert does not know what happened to the house or if it is still their.
Robert made a few mistakes using the wrong word at the wrong time, and a few small gramatical errors. Robert explained the house that he was in with good details.
ReplyDeleteHe had good details but his spelling need work on! Good job Robert!
ReplyDeleteHe needs to work on spelling and grammar. He had really good details.
ReplyDeleteHe had good description of the house some parts were confusing and there were certain mistakes like the quotations when people were talking you missed one of one of your words
ReplyDeleteHe could have used more descriptive words at some parts, but over all it was a good story and well writen!
ReplyDeleteYou made mistakes on your word use. You also need to work on your spelling. It was a really good story though.
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